Writing and Reading Verse: A Digression
I postponed putting up Katherine Dalton’s reply until I had time to make some response. Although I did finally post her comment on Part II, it is helpful, I think, to put it here: Ah, poetess. Makes me feel all be-bluestocking’d and olde quaintee. I have no argument with “since,” but as I read it, the replacement of “it seems” with “since” still leaves four beats in that line—it just makes the line begin with a stressed syllable instead of an unstressed. SINCE anOTHer FORty-TWO. I had orginally written “It seems another forty Have just arrived today” but I missed the enjambment,...



